The Narrative Arc

I have recently been researching diagrams to represent the Narrative Arc.  I had completed a personal memoir, River Girl, based partly on childhood memories, that was complex in structure. How was I to analyse and to improve, if necessary, on this work in terms of its overall structure?  I had never mapped out plots and story lines beforehand, preferring to focus on creating believable characters and “zingy” writing in the first instance.

It seemed to me, in fact, that some genres e.g. detective stories and thrillers, were better suited to pre-planning methods, while other narratives depended on the writer “getting it down” first, and worrying about structural issues later on. I saw myself as belonging to the latter category, rather than to the former.

However, I also saw that at some stage in the writing process, any writer will need to consider the overall structure of a longer work. This might take place towards the end, or in the middle, rather than at the beginning of the task of writing a novel. So it became more and more important for me, as I came to the end of writing my works, to consider what makes a successful narrative in terms of overall structure. This led me to try to identify the elements and functions of the narrative arc.

One diagram, found on many writers’ sites, (see below), is clean and simple, based on Freytag’s Pyramid.

Freytag’s Pyramid

There are many examples of narrative arc diagrams—all originating from Aristotle’s ideas in Poetics—often with only minor variations.

Here is an example by a well-known Australian writer, Kate Forsyth.

According to this diagram, there are seven main points to the structure of a short story or a novel: the Begining; the Inciting Incident, followed by a crisis; the Midpoint/Reversal ( 2nd Crisis); the Climax (Crisis 3) ; the Falling Action; the Resolution; the End.

The Main Points:

1. A short story, or a novel, starts with exposition: scene setting, characters and “usual life” of the protagonist.

2. The inciting incident is the catalyst: the crystal that starts the snowball rolling upwards and onwards towards the climax, then downwards towards the resolution and the conclusion.

It does not have to be in the first paragraph, but must set the ball rolling (rising action) towards the midpoint and the climax. Tension and conflict are represented by the upward movement.

3. An obstacle, or several obstacles are placed on the hero’s pathway, becoming evident soon after the inciting incident, and still being worked out around the midpoint of the story.

4. The midpoint is often where a shift takes place; this can be a shift in time, place or spiritual awareness on the part of the protagonist.

5. The Climax (2nd Turning Point or Crisis 3) occurs after the midpoint towards the end of the novel or short story.

6. A falling action begins after that point. This is represented by the downward movement heading towards the resolution, the denouement.

The inciting incident and the conclusion of the story are intimately related.

The introduction sets up a promise that is fulfilled in the conclusion.

This brings to mind Joseph Campbell’s idea, represented in The Hero with a Thousand Faces, of there being a great number of stories subsumed within one basic mythical parameter of “The Hero’s Journey”.

Perhaps all well-written stories follow certain structural parameters as well.